User:JEOushak/Reprivatization/ElainaM2456 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: JEOushak


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JEOushak/Reprivatization?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Reprivatization

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I thought your first draft looked good. I think adding in more international examples is a nice expansion of the article. The main things I thought you should improve for the final draft is your use of sources. Your new sections mainly only contain one citation which I don't think is reflective of the information you added in. The rubric mentions you use at least five sources and I think citing more facts in your writing could help with this. I also think, even if you didn't want to add to the other sections of the article it could be beneficial to try and find citations for other areas in the article. The original article doesn't have any citations so I think that is something you might want to work on as well as just improving your own use of citations. Lastly, a smaller thing I noticed as that in the South Korea example I think you use de-privatization when you meant to use re-privatization (unless I understood wrong). So overall I think everything in your contribution makes sense in the article and fits in well, but I think your use of sources and your citations should be improved.