User:JESOTO89/Entomophagy in humans/Lrodr053 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(JESOTO89)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JESOTO89/sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Entomophagy in humans

Evaluate the drafted changes
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 * 1) I think the current article uses a good amount of pictures.
 * 2) I would edit or add a section on how entomophagy in humans had is involved with evolution.
 * 3) I would also edit the history section to relate towards why humans began to eat insects.
 * 4) I would also add information to the evolutionary precursor for homo sapiens
 * 5) I think this article could use some fluff by adding information concerning evolution and how consumption of insects aided human evolution. Possibly by discussing the type of environment and food available that led to the consumption of insects.