User:JG2027/Equality Act (United States)/Areyes12 Peer Review

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Areyes12
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:JG2027/Equality Act (United States)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Equality Act (United States)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The writer organized the different organizations that support the equality act with the subheading, which is great since it helps understand and find. The writer also added clarifying words or adjective words for the readers to have a better understanding.

I wonder if there is anything that can be cited from this, "Religious organizations that have expressed their support for the act claim that this act would protect transgender children and people; however, this has been overshadowed by the strong opposition by other religious groups and organizations." and make it more neutral tone.

Overall the writer, made the article flow and structured better.