User:JG2027/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Equality Act (United States), LGBT rights in California

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The reason why I chosen to evaluate the Equality Act article is because of the overwhelming structure that the article currently has. The article appropriately explains the premise and the history of the Equality act. However, when trying to outline the different outlets of support, the article’s structure is too wordy and doesn’t present the information in an easily digestible way. The reason why this matters is because it will allow readers to easily understand what organizations support the act if it’s distinguished by categories such as human rights and business.

Evaluate the article
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