User:JG2027/LGBT rights in California/Areyes12 Peer Review

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Areyes12
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:JG2027/LGBT rights in California
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):LGBT rights in California

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I like how you added updated laws that are being implemented in the future that involve gender-identity inclusive bathrooms. However I was lost by where you put this updated law. I wonder if you can make it a timeline for the rights, so it is more organized. I wonder if you can add any updates on the "lead" section.