User:JHer359/Mitosome/DFM021 Peer Review

General info
JHer359
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Mitosome
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mitosome

Evaluate the drafted changes
In your introduction, the line "found in some unicellular eukaryotic organisms", instead of using "some" what are the characteristics of organisms that contain these? Do they have anything else in common besides this?

Later on you say " almost certainly derived from" you could use "is currently believed to be derived from" or another set of words to better describe that this is the leading theory. Could say "A leading theory is that these are derived from".

Your information is great, your citations are credible. You paint a good picture. The word choice on occasion is sometimes to vague or has connotations that the author has a viewpoint regarding the purpose or origin. The overall information is great but I would be more particular on your word choice.