User:JHolman43/Social construction of gender/Hitomi1252 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JHolman43, Kweekwa, ETWestacott


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JHolman43/Social_construction_of_gender?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social construction of gender

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the article does not say too much regarding sex and gender categories, so you should try to add more. You should create several sections and dig into regarding sex and gender categories. Also, I think there are a few numbers of information your group cited to create this article. By using academic pages on the internet and books, you can get information on the various points of view regarding sex and gender categories. It will be an effective way to write this article.