User:JHolman43/Social construction of gender/VenerableBird Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JHolman43


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JHolman43/Social construction of gender


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social construction of gender

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Additions are well written, but there should be maybe a few more cited sources within some of the longer sections. For example, under "Media", this passage "The Internet reflects the values of offline society, and the jokes made online reveal the values and opinions reflected in those jokes, despite them being couched in humor." is not given a source, which makes it read as opinion. Otherwise, everything looks good, well done!