User:JJ1023/Blood-borne disease/Brays.world Peer Review

Lead: the lead has not been updated to reflect any new content

Content: The content you have added is relevant to the topic and up to date.

Tone and Balance: Your content was neutral.

Sources and References: All new content was backed up however, not all of your added content reflected what the cited source says. Your source is thorough and written by a diverse set of authors. However, only one of two of your sources worked, I could not click the link in one of the sources cited.

Organization: One of your statements, "Needles are not the only issue, as direct splashes of blood also cause transmission." was clear and easy to read. It also was also well organized in the article. However your statement, "There have been reports of transferring HCW to patients. This happens usually when surgeons perform PPE.", is not clear to read. HCW is the abbreviation for health care worker, therefore your statement is not clear when you say "There have been reports of transferring HCW to patients." I think you meant there has been reports of viruses transmitted FROM HCW to patients. But in all, the statement wasn't clear. Also, PPE is referring to the equipment used for personal protection, therefore PPE itself cannot be preformed. So your statement, "This happens usually when surgeons perform PPE.", is also unclear.

Overall Impressions: I do not think the article is more complete with the added information. I believe there needs to be more content added to the draft!

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