User:JJAtSchool/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating the cybertext article

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen to evaluate this article because it has a cool name, and the article is fleshed out. After looking through the examples given at the end of the article, I have found this topic to be super cool

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead section: The article starts off with a high-level definition of the topic, this would be good for people that have academic interest in the area. However, as a general overview the overly academic word choice could leave many readers confused. Other than the definition the lead section is empty.

Content: The content does not stray away from the topic. Article has been updated within the year and does not deal with equity gaps. I would like a laymen level explanation of the topic as I am confused as to what the topic is truly about.

Tone: Remains neutral, I don't see any agendas being pushed.

Sources: The sources are from academic entries and are most likely related to the topic. A few links are broken.

Talk: The talk page is pretty empty, not much collaboration there.

Overall impression:

The article is labeled as a start class article and is low - medium low priority. The article serves a decent introduction towards the topic if the reader already has a decent understanding towards this field of study. I would improve the article by breaking down some of the more complex topics and trying to share the information in an easier to understand format. The two definitions of the topic that I understand is it is a scholarly/poetic choose your own adventure or as a piece of literature that is about the journey and not the content (confusion may be a feature and not a bug). I think the article is a well-developed start to a topic that needs fleshing out.