User:JJJ156/sandbox

This is my user sandbox. It is used for articles that I am editing without my edits affecting the live article until I am ready for it to do so. Below is an article evaluation on the two articles of HIV/AIDS in Malawi and HIV-affected community.

Article evaluations
Everything in two articles are relevant to the article topics of HIV in Malawi and HIV affected communities. Both articles can be seen as neutral, though in the Malawi article it seems to place a substantial amount of blame for the HIV epidemic in Malawi on the first president Hastings Banda, despite this only being supported by the single source 1 of the AVERT article. While this article seems neutral and accurate, the lack of multiple sources may cause the initial claim in the heading and the history to be a bit biased.

On first sight, the first article is a designated "Good" article, while the second article is marked as a stub with only one sentence in the article. Both articles are placed under the WikiProject label of Medicine, while the Malawi article is also in the WikiProjects of Malawi and Viruses. An interesting note is that both articles are marked as of low importance under the WikiProjects of Medicine. For the second article, there is nothing in its Talk page and its revision history shows only a few attempts to clean up the stub, but no efforts currently to improve it. On the other hand, the Talk page of the Malawi article is filled with suggestions and comments on the work, as well as the responses of the original user to the comments to improve the article. For example, some editors brought up issues of having a wider variety of sources, or having ambiguities in wording that can be improved to allow this article to gain the good article rating. For the second article, it does not offer a lot of information, as it simply defines HIV affected community, whereas the Malawi article inspires the reader to dig deeper into the crosslinks and sources to learn more about the topic from different sources.

The article itself however, does seem to be quite out of date because the statistics in this article come from sources in the 2000s and up to 2014. In the talk page, there are more comments about newer developments that are relevant to the topic, but are not addressed in any new edits of the article, like the circumcision disaster. What is good about the article, though, is that its facts are all referenced with scientific papers and reliable statistical sources that are neutral towards this topic. Finally, Wikipedia talks about this topic in a way that does not necessary lay out any conclusions to the information given, instead, it offers multiple perspectives given the information and allows the reader to come up to their own independent conclusion on the topic.

Content gaps
I believe that a content gap in Wikipedia is where a significant topic or argument in the issue is missing from the Wikipedia article. An easy way to identify them is to see if the article addresses the whole topic at hand. For instance, if an article on HIV in Asia focuses only on certain countries, but misses out key information from other nations with severe HIV issues, then there is a content gap in the article. Any way to identify a content gap is to look in the Talk page, as other editors will often point out content gaps and give the original author suggestions on how to fill them.

Content gaps can arise in many ways. The main reason why content gaps arise is because there may just not be enough information on the topic to effectively write about all the necessary content. This is especially true for newer scientific issues that may not yet have sufficiently reviewed literature from multiple perspectives. Other times, the literature may be out there, but the author may not have researched deeply enough to find it. In other cases, the content gap may be intentional, as the author may have a bias that causes them to feel the need to omit key information that may, for example, portray the topic of their article in a different light than they believe should be portrayed. The first type of content gaps may only be resolved as time goes on and more reliable literature is established. For the second and third type, the removal of the content gap depends on other editors to step in through the Talk pages or to edit the article to put in the relevant information that the original author is unable, or unwilling to include.

It does matter who writes on Wikipedia because Wikipedia is an online encyclopedia that is used by millions of people worldwide. Authors of Wikipedia entries must be intelligent, capable of preforming accurate research from multiple perspectives, and capable of writing without a bias on the topic at hand in a way that the general public can understand. Bias in Wikipedia means having a visible point of view in the writing or having sources from only one side of the many possible sides of the topic at hand. In real life, bias is something that is inescapable because everyone has their own experiences and it is something that we try to reduce in our writing. After all, the normal idea of bias is that everything one says or writes has an argument, or a purpose for the writing. However, Wikipedia is different because its purpose is to write in a neutral manner to educate the public and allow them to come to their own conclusions. This is why when writing on or editing an article in Wikipedia, it is important that the topic each editor works on is one that does not relate to the editor and the editor has no stakes in. For example, writing about one's favorite restaurant or editing an article on one's family member is inappropriate because there is bound to be natural bias present that prevents the reader from seeing the topic from all sides and reaching a conclusion by themselves.

HIV/AIDS in Haiti
This article, while an important topic regarding the development of HIV/AIDs in North America, is currently a stub and I would like to add sections to it that deal with topics such as "the Haitian Connection" controversy, history of HIV/AIDS in Haiti, prevalence of the virus, preventative efforts, effect of the 2010 earthquake on the HIV program. I would also like to, in the process, add more links and update the information in the article as a whole.

Some sources I will be using:

History of AIDS in Haiti, Prevalence, Prevention Efforts, Earthquake https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3011860/

"Haitian Connection" https://www.avert.org/professionals/history-hiv-aids/origin

Haiti HIV Data http://www.unaids.org/en/regionscountries/countries/haiti

Risk Groups http://pdf.usaid.gov/pdf_docs/Pnadr360.pdf

HIV Equity http://www.who.int/whr/2004/media_centre/en/lancet.pdf

Earthquake Aftermath https://pulitzercenter.org/projects/caribbean/after-quake-hivaids-haiti

Original Article in Mainspace
Haiti has a 1.8 percent prevalence rate of HIV/AIDS, among the highest percentage-wise in the Caribbean region (behind the Bahamas, and Belize). However, it has the most overall cases of HIV/AIDS in the Caribbean region with an estimated 120,000 HIV/AIDS-positive Haitians.

As of 2013, UNAIDS, the Joint United Nations Programme on HIV/AIDS, reports that Haiti's national HIV prevalence are among adults aged between 15 and 49. and is primarily transmitted through heterosexual contact, followed by mother-to-infant transmission. The recent declines in HIV infection rates are most notable in urban areas, and have been attributed to significant behavioral changes, including decreased number of partners, decreased sexual debut, and increased condom use. Other explanations for the recent trends include AIDS-related mortality and improvements made in blood safety early in the epidemic. Continued political instability, high internal migration rates, high prevalence of sexually transmitted infections, and weakened health and social services persist as factors with potential negative impacts on the epidemic.

Dr. Jacques Pépin, a Quebecer author of The Origins of AIDS, stipulated that Haiti was one of HIV's entry points to the United States. In July 1960, as the Congo gained independence, the United Nations recruited Francophone experts and technicians from all over the world to assist in filling administrative gaps left by Belgium, who did not leave behind an African elite to run the country. By 1962, Haitians made up the second largest group of well-educated experts in the country totaling around 4500. One of them may have carried HIV back across the Atlantic in the 1960s. Pépin argues that its spread in Haiti was sped by poor Haitians in need of money selling their blood plasma at centers such as Hemo-Caribbean, which was known to have poor hygienic practices. Plasma centers separate plasma from blood cells, which could be returned to the patient, and failing to change needles and tubing between patients rapidly spreads blood-borne diseases. Luckner Cambronne, co-owner of Hemo-Caribbean and also head of the fearsome private militia, the Tonton Macoutes, was known as the "Vampire of the Caribbean" for notoriously selling Haitian blood and cadavers abroad for medical uses. Plasma from Hemo-Caribbean was exported to the United States at a maximum rate of 5,000 to 6,000 litres per month in the early 1970s.

In his 1990 book "AIDS and Accusation," Paul Farmer refutes the idea that Haiti was an HIV entry point to the USA. Through conducting an epidemiological study on the prevalence of sarcomas associated with HIV/AIDS contraction, Farmer suggests that Cambronne's plasma business occurred before identifiers of HIV infection were recorded in Haiti, indicating that the disease did not arrive in Haiti until at least the late-1970s. Farmer instead argues that HIV/AIDS in Haiti was introduced by visitors from the US.

Regardless of origin, the consequences of HIV/AIDS in Haiti were severe. The disease spread rapidly throughout Haiti, infecting thousands. Haiti's burgeoning tourist industry suffered greatly from the association with HIV/AIDS, and Haitians living in the USA were placed on the banned list for blood donations, alongside homosexuals and intravenous drug users, until 1990.

Final Draft of Updated HIV in Haiti article
With an estimated 150,000 people living with HIV/AIDS in 2016 (or a 2.1 percent prevalence rate among adults aged 15-49), Haiti has the most overall cases of HIV/AIDS in the Caribbean, and its HIV prevalence rates among the highest percentage-wise in the region. There are many risk factors groups for HIV infection in Haiti, with the most common ones including lower socioeconomic status, lower educational levels, risky behavior, and lower levels of awareness regarding HIV and its transmission. However, HIV prevalence in Haiti is dropping largely as a result of a strong AIDS/HIV educational program, support from Non-Governmental Organizations and private donors, as well as a strong healthcare system supported by UNAIDS. Part of the success of Haiti's HIV healthcare system lies in the governmental commitment to the issue, which alongside the support of donations from the Global Fund and the President's Emergency Plan For AIDS Relief (PEPFAR), allows the nation to prioritize the issue. Despite the extreme poverty afflicting a large Haitian population, the severe economic impact HIV has on the nation, and the controversy surrounding how the virus spread to Haiti and the United States, Haiti is on the path to providing universal treatment, with other developing nations emulating its AIDS treatment system.

History
AIDS in Haitians was first recognized in 34 Haitians living in the United States in 1982, and in the same year eleven individuals in Haiti were suspected to be HIV infected. Since the majority of these individuals did not fall into the classic risk factor groups, Haitians were classified as a separate risk factor group, causing damage to Haiti's image and economy and affecting tourism. In the same year, the Haitian Study Group on Kaposi's Sarcoma and Opportunistic Infections (GHESKIO) was formed to study the new epidemic. GHESKIO used retrospective diagnosis to conclude that from 1979 to 1982, there were 61 cases of AIDS in Haiti. Through various studies and analyses, GHESKIO concluded that the risk factors identified in the 61 individuals were no different to those in other countries, with the primary risk factor being the fact that most of the patients lived in the suburb of Carrefour where prostitution was prevalent. The stigmatization of Haiti, however, continued, and during the presidency of Jean-Claude Duvalier, it was illegal to mention AIDS/HIV in Haiti. From 1983 to 1987, the virus spread quickly through the population mostly through heterosexual sex, as HIV infected cases attributed to homosexuals or bisexuals went down from 50% to less than 1%. In a 1985 to 2000 study, the virus spread twice as fast as in developed nations prior to the use of antiretrovirals, as malnutrition, infectious communities, and active tuberculosis were all prevalent in Haiti. Jean-Bertrand Aristide, the first democratically elected President of Haiti, was the first Haitian president to include HIV/AIDS into his platform for his 2001-2004 presidency and initiated governmental policies to ensure the blood supply remained uncontaminated and to prevent and treat the virus within the population.

Prevalence
In Haiti, the three groups in which HIV/AIDS is most prevalent are men who have sex with men, sex workers, and prisoners, with prevalence rates of 18.2, 8.4, and 4.3 respectively. As opposed to the United States, intravenous drug use in Haiti was less common and the blood supply was not initially affected by HIV infected individuals. As such, intravenous drug users and hemophiliacs were never major risk factor groups in Haiti.

As of 2017, UNAIDS, the Joint United Nations Programme on HIV/AIDS, reported that HIV in Haiti was most prevalent among adults aged 15 to 49 and was primarily transmitted through heterosexual contact and mother-to-infant transmission.

The recent declines in HIV infection rates are most notable in urban areas and have been attributed to significant behavioral changes, including decreased number of partners, decreased sexual debut, and increased condom use. Other explanations for the recent trends include AIDS-related mortality and improvements made in blood safety early in the epidemic. However, continued political instability, high internal migration rates, high prevalence of sexually transmitted infections, and weakened health and social services persist as factors with potential negative impacts on the epidemic.

Risk factors
According to a 2010 study, one major risk factor for HIV infection in Haiti, especially in women, is lower socioeconomic status. In rural Haitian populations where education levels for women are low and many women are economically dependent on their husbands, a correlation between the stability of the occupation of the husband and HIV prevalence in the wives is observed. Women whose husbands are market vendors or mechanics are at a higher risk of HIV infection. On the contrary, the wives of farmers, a more stable occupation, have a 60% lower risk of HIV infection. Other indicators of low socioeconomic status, like the use of charcoal for cooking and food insecurity also show correlation with higher HIV infection rates in women. The study stipulates that low socioeconomic status and high rates of HIV infection may be connected to the use of transactional sex as an economic survival strategy, a behavior shown in a related South African study to increase HIV infection rates by 1.5 times. Similar trends from related studies have also been seen in other developing nations with gender disparities, such as Malawi, Rwanda, Kenya, Ghana, Democratic Republic of Congo, Zambia, and Uganda.

Another vulnerable group is adolescents and young adults. For females, risk factor groups include those who have low levels of education, live away from their parents, have been married, or have had a child. For males, factors indicative of HIV infection are intravenous drug use and sexual debut with an unknown individual. For both genders, young adults who are less aware of HIV and its transmission through risky behavior are more likely to be infected, and amongst females, those who talked more openly about HIV infection and testing were less likely to be infected. Finally, having sexual contact with unfaithful partners, having an STI, especially syphilis, and not using condoms are all additional risk factors that affect both genders.

Economic impact
On the national level, HIV causes damage to the Haitian economy because the individuals most affected by the epidemic are the young adults that contribute the most to the country's economy. At the start of the epidemic, Haiti's tourism and export industries suffered when Haitians were classified as an HIV risk group. According to Jean Pape, the head of the largest Haitian HIV research center, Haitian products could no longer be sold in the US and tourism, which was the basis of the Haitian economy, declined drastically. With 54% of the Haiti economy based on the service and tourism sector, HIV further weakened Haiti's already struggling economy.

On a household level, HIV causes significant economic strain to the family of infected individuals. HIV infection in a parent can lead to the loss of one source of income which in turn leads to malnutrition, lack of access to education for the children, and increased risk of child labor. The cost of healthcare is another burden on the family. From a 1997 study involving 600 households from Côte d'Ivoire, Burundi, and Haiti, households with at least one HIV infected family member spent nearly twice the amount on healthcare (around 10.6%) compared to families without HIV infected individuals, decreasing household consumption in other areas. The HIV treatment also on average took up 80% of the entire family's healthcare budget. Even after the death of the HIV infected individual, the household never completely returned to its original level of consumption.

HIV treatment and prevention
Nearly 75% of HIV treatment in Haiti is sponsored and overseen by the NGOs Partners In Health and Haitian Study Group on Kaposi’s Sarcoma and Opportunistic Infections (GHESKIO) in collaboration with the Haitian Ministry of Health. Alongside them, the Joint United Nations Team on AIDS (Joint Team) in Haiti also helps provide the resources to tackle HIV through prevention, treatment, and testing, accelerating the nationwide HIV response. As of 2016, around 55% of Haitians of all ages received antiretroviral therapy.

Elimination of mother-to-child transmission (vertical transmission)
Prior to the efforts to eliminate vertical transmission of HIV, around 27% of babies born to HIV infected mothers in Haiti contracted the virus from their mothers through breast milk. As a preventative measure, GHESKIO and the Ministry of Health set up national guidelines for HIV infected mothers and newborn babies to receive doses of zidovudine. Since 2003, Haiti has altered its guidelines to allow triple drug ART for pregnant HIV infected women, treatments for existing opportunistic infections, and counseling on the use of formula feed instead of breast milk to lower transmission rates. Since the use of triple therapy, HIV transmission rates from mother to child for those on triple drug ART has decreased to around 1.9%, while the transmission rates among all pregnant women treated for HIV in any form has dropped to 9.2%, both of which are significant decreases from the initial 27% vertical transmission. The Joint Team and UNICEF also provides manuals on preventing mother to child transmission of HIV and offers prenatal and postpartum counseling services to HIV infected mothers to stem vertical transmission in Haiti. However, further educational efforts are necessary as only around 40% of Haitian HIV infected mothers attend these counseling services, and an even smaller amount get tested for HIV prior to childbirth. Around 80% of Haitians recognize that the virus can be transmitted vertically, however, the majority of Haitians do not know that treatment of both the mother and child in the weeks before and after childbirth can greatly decrease the risk of infection in the baby. This coupled with the fact that around 80% of childbirth in Haiti takes place at home instead of in a hospital necessitates that further connection of HIV infected individuals with the health networks in Haiti is essential to stem vertical transmission.

HIV Equity Initiative
In 1985, Paul Farmer and his colleagues created a clinic in the Central Plateau of Haiti to serve those displaced by the creation of a hydroelectric dam. The first case of HIV recorded at this clinic was in 1986. In 1987, Farmer spearheaded the effort that lead to the founding of Partners in Health. After a 1994 paper detailing the effects of AZT on lowering the rates of transmission from mother to child, the HIV clinic began offering HIV testing and antiretroviral therapy to pregnant mothers, leading to a sharp decline in cases of mother to child transmission. Starting in 1997, the clinic made post-exposure prophylaxis (PEP) available to women who suffered from rape and HIV health workers who had occupation injuries. In late 1998, individuals with long term severe opportunistic infections were offered antiretroviral therapy as opposed to only being allowed to treat their symptoms for free. For those infected with the more life-threatening tuberculosis, anti-tuberculous therapy was prioritized over ART. Partners in Health's success largely comes from the directly observed therapy that is given to the patients through health care workers known as accompagnateurs. Accompagnateurs help the therapy process by making sure the pills are taken on time, answering questions and concerns, and offering moral support to patients and their families. The clinic also assists the family by offering social services such as payment of tuition and highly attended meetings for patients to stay involved in the treatment process. The success of the program in Haiti served as an model to other developing nations that, despite high unemployment, low GDP per capita, and high HIV prevalence, any nation can have a successful HIV treatment program, regardless of urbanization and wealth.

HIV prevention
HIV prevention has been brought about, especially in the younger generation, through education and the spreading of awareness of safe sex practices and condom use. The Joint Team, in 2016, has collaborated with the Ministry of Education to create health clubs and programs in 100 schools as well as trained 566 educators, supplied over a million condoms, hosted more than 7000 HIV tests, and referred more than 80% of infected individuals from those tests to seek treatment. UNICEF also sponsored efforts to create a video series and a Facebook page targeted towards the 15-35 age group to spread awareness about the risks of HIV and measures to prevent transmission.

Challenges
After the devastation caused by the 2010 Haitian Earthquake, Haiti's HIV treatment system was affected greatly. Estimates by the Haitian government indicate that around 40% of the initial 24,000 Haitians lost access to antiretrovirals after the earthquake. HIV positive individuals displaced due to the earthquake often live in substandard conditions in tent cities, decreasing their immunity and increasing their susceptibility to infection or progressing to AIDS. The large concentration of HIV positive individuals in confined tent cities also increases the risk of HIV transmission within the smaller community of individuals. However, the overall structure of the HIV treatment system has largely remained intact and the majority of HIV infected patients continue to receive access to antiviral therapy while the nation rebuilds the rest of its healthcare system.

Other challenges to the HIV treatment and prevention efforts in Haiti include more recent events, such as Hurricane Matthew, the cholera outbreak, additional refugees arriving from the Dominican Republic, the limitations on the human and financial resources the NGOs can provide, and the fluctuating level of cooperation from the Haitian government.

The Haitian connection controversy
The Haitian connection controversy refers to the debate regarding the origins of the HIV virus in Haiti and the Unites States and whether or not HIV was spread into the US by Haitians or into Haiti by Americans. The controversy began in the 1982, when the CDC noted that 34 cases of immunodeficient patients were Haitian. This "connection" noted by physicians caused the erroneous labeling of Haitians as a risk factor group for HIV, leading to the rise of the term "the 4-H's" referring to homosexuals, hemophiliacs, heroine addicts, and Haitians as the major groups prone to HIV infection.

Dr. Jacques Pépin, a Quebecer author of The Origins of AIDS, stipulated that Haiti was one of HIV's entry points to the United States. In July 1960, when Belgian Congo gained independence, the United Nations recruited Francophone experts and technicians from all over the world to assist in filling administrative gaps left by Belgium. By 1962, Haitians made up the second largest group of well-educated experts in the country totaling around 4500. One of them may have carried HIV back across the Atlantic in the 1960s. Pépin argues that its spread in Haiti was sped by poor Haitians in need of money selling their blood plasma at centers such as Hemo-Caribbean, which was known to have poor hygienic practices. Plasma centers separated plasma from blood cells and failed to change needles and tubing between patients, a practice that rapidly spreads blood-borne diseases. Luckner Cambronne, co-owner of Hemo-Caribbean and known as the "Vampire of the Caribbean", was notorious for selling Haitian blood and cadavers abroad for medical uses. Plasma from Hemo-Caribbean was exported to the United States at a maximum rate of 5,000 to 6,000 litres per month in the early 1970s.

In his 1990 book "AIDS and Accusation," Paul Farmer refutes the idea that Haiti was an HIV entry point to the USA. Referencing an epidemiological study on the prevalence of sarcomas associated with HIV/AIDS contraction, Farmer suggests that Cambronne's plasma business occurred before identifiers of HIV infection were recorded in Haiti, indicating that the disease did not arrive in Haiti until at least the late-1970s. Farmer instead argues that HIV/AIDS in Haiti was introduced by visitors from the US.

In a 2007 study, 5 HIV isolates from different regions were compared on the molecular level. By comparing the number of mutations present in different strands of HIV taken from patients from Central Africa, the United States, and Haiti, the results predict that the Haitian strain of the virus is the genetic midpoint between the strains found in Central Africa and the United States, and that the virus traveled from Haiti to the United States about 3 years after it reached Haiti. However, this study is refuted by Jean Pape as a continuation of decades old prejudice against Haiti in regards to the AIDS epidemic, as the study does not provide conclusive evidence that the virus traveled from Haiti to the US.

Regardless of origin, the consequences of the HIV origin controversy on Haiti were severe. The disease spread rapidly throughout Haiti, infecting thousands. Haiti's burgeoning tourist industry suffered greatly from the association with HIV/AIDS, and Haitians living in the USA were placed on the banned list for blood donations, alongside homosexuals and intravenous drug users, until 1990.