User:JJJ7171/Boreal Chickadee/Pearl.emokaro Peer Review

Lead

The lead has not been updated to reflect the new content added by my peer. The lead does include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article’s topic. The lead does not include a brief description of the article’s major sections. The lead does not include any information that is not present in the article. The lead of this article is concise.

Content

The content added is relevant to the topic and is up to date. This article does not deal with one of Wikipedia’s equity gaps and does not address topics related to historical underrepresented populations or topics. How to clean up the section:

Introductory Section:

Information about the nest and how it can be created: “This nest can be made of hair, fur or dead plants “should be added to the introductory paragraph of this article as this where details of the habitat are initially discussed.

Description Section:

This portion of the original article is very already very informative and covers a lot of information about this bird. It seems that there could possibly be the addition of breeding information to this section. Breeding information should not be inserted in the middle of this section because it breaks up the flow of the topics being covered in the section. If more information about the call the bird makes can be found – this would be a perfect addition to this section.

Behaviour Section:

This is where information about breeding periods should be added. In the original article, this section highlights the breeding and nesting behaviour of the bird. Information on when eggs are laid and the behaviour of the birds after the eggs have hatched, should be added to this section.

In the original article, there is not much detail about the Predation of this bird. If more information can be found about this topic, this article would be more informative to anyone looking for a good general overview of the Boreal chickadee.

Tone and Balance:

The overall tone of this article is neutral. These are no claims that appear to be biased towards or against any position. No viewpoint is over or underrepresented in this article. No content added or already present in this article is added to persuade the reader from any position.

Sources and References

All new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information. Many good sources were found for the additional information added to this article. However, the number of new sources found, does not add up to the amount of new information found. Majority of this initial edit are extracts from the original article. Most of the sources used were written by somewhat of a diverse spectrum – most of the sources were written by women, however, all the sources were written by white people. The sources used were current and thorough. The sources used were peer-reviewed sources so, some of the best sources that were available were used for this article. The links work.