User:JJ Irelandd/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The Sense of an Ending

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it was about a book I purchased approximately one hour ago, and I was curious to learn more about it. The article is well-constructed and follows the preliminary guidelines, as the first paragraph was succinct and provided the information I wanted without spoiling any of the novel's content.

Evaluate the article
Wikipedia is essentially about providing information equitably, neutrally, and accessibly. The only critique I hold for the article covering The Sense of an Ending by Julian Barnes is that the paragraphs are not indented/divided clearly. For example, the paragraph under Publication and Marketing illustrates the book's publication in the United Kingdom and the United States, but also includes how the release in the United States was pushed back by Random House's choice; it immediately then states that Suzanne Dean designed the cover. While these subjects can exist under the same heading, throughout the article there are huge paragraphs that cover throes of information in one swoop. They could be divided to be read more clearly.