User:JJ Irelandd/Impressionen vom alten Marseiller Hafen (Vieux Port)/Kbrocckilli Peer Review

General info
Julia Hedges, JJ Ireland
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JJ%20Irelandd/Impressionen_vom_alten_Marseiller_Hafen_%28Vieux_Port%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Maybe put the title in the first sentence in bold (thats what Wiki says to do)

- The lead section is great and the ending of how it was burnt down is cool to read

- The exact number of some shots may be unnecessary

- Maybe more citations during the synopsis part? Idk how but

- Overall really good