User:JJames2/C. Mildred Thompson/ALogan21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JJames2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * C. Mildred Thompson
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * C. Mildred Thompson

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article feels like it is lacking some things. You could add some add some info about her personal life and her career. The brief summary or lead is great to get this article started, but you will need to add to it. You should also add some pictures of Thompson, so we know who it is you are talking about. You are on the right track, but just need to add some more information in there so your audience will know more about her and have a better understanding. - ALogan21