User:JJlemus/Neurodiversity/Kekecole Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JJlemus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * JJlemus' Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * JJlemus' Current

Evaluate the drafted changes
You've added and changed a lot. I'm in awe of your changes right now. There are no leading statement changes yet. I like that you went in and deleted some ramblings but I think you need to further expand on why you decided to delete or change them. The sections are clearly spaced and organized. I don't see any grammatical errors but I'm not great when it comes to accessing grammar. The last suggestion I want to add is maybe including where you will be putting your revisions in the article.