User:JKDegeorgeo/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Bauhaus

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I study architecture and I know of the Bauhaus movement but I want to get to know it better.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is very well constructed. It is concise while being thorough enough that it introduces each of its major sections. All of the content is relevant to the topic and each section is proportionally sized. I think it makes sense that the "Impact" section is the one of the bigger sections as the impacts of the Bauhaus movement are monumental and it is one of the most influential part of design history. I think the tone reflected this importance, so because of that, it is not written completely neutrally. Sources seem to be accessible and accurate. There is a range of publication dates, ranging from the 90s to 2022. Overall I think this is a really strong article. There are proposed things to add in the talk section. I think one piece that could be added is the criticism of the Bauhaus philosophy. I don't see it mentioned and I think it could balance the tone of the article to be more neutral. I think this piece of information is relevant to the movement's impacts as I believe it also started counter movements.