User:JKL7794/Membrane curvature/Editorzcj Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JKL7794


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JKL7794/Membrane curvature
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Membrane curvature

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * No changes are made to the lead

Content


 * The content is interesting and informative
 * The content is relevant
 * Everything seems to belong fine
 * "When asymmetric lipid compositions are present within membranes when they are unable to curve due to other surrounding factors, the membrane is destabilized - further supporting the crucial role that lipid composition plays in membrane curvature."
 * This particular sentence is phrased oddly. I would recommend a restructure.

Tone/Balance


 * Very even tone
 * Information is relevant and balanced throughout the paragraph

Sources/References


 * Sources look good generally

Organization


 * Well organized. I'd love to see the whole article reorganized if you end up having the time.

Images and Media


 * Looking forward to see the image

Overall Impressions


 * Keep up the great work!