User:JLR02/Manchester, Washington/Noienoah Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JLR02


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JLR02/Manchester%2C_Washington?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manchester, Washington

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is on topic and summarizes nicely. However, you have added a limited amount of content. If you wish to add more make sure you get feedback. From what you did add it looks alright. I recommend adding a new section topic of your choice to the wiki. Maybe important people or go into depth on the war time military installations. You kept the content you did add neutral which is good.

If you need help going forward with new content look at other similar town Wikipedia pages for direction.