User:JLeo500/Dalila Paola Mendez/Chicanaart2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JLeo500


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JLeo500/Dalila_Paola_Mendez?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

You have a good informative and concise lead! I like how you briefly went over what her art is about without giving too much away.

Background and Early Life

You introduced her life in a chronological manner which made it very easy to follow.

Overall

All your information is very tone neutral which is great! Adding the films she's worked on was very helpful and helped to add more to what she's created. All sentenced were followed by citations which is crucial to this project. Even when describing her art and her films you never convey any positive or negative tones which is great and you are still able to accurately describe her work.