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John Parry (American football official) John Parry (American football official)

The article on John Parry is rated as a stub class article. I do agree with this rating as the article only brushes the surface of his career as an official and also doesn't go into what he does after officiating. There could be a whole section added on what being a "Rules Analyst" for Monday Night Football en tales. Also could go into greater details about his career of being an official.

There is only one comment on the talk page, it was just someone editing a link in the article. There has been nothing on the talk page since April of 2017, Parry became a rules analyst in April of 2019 so there are new topics that can be discussed. The last edit to the page itself came around a month ago.

The information given on the page is a little choppy multiple things could be dived deeper into, but the way that it is represented now is appropriately written for a Wiki page. Nothing is written biased but it could be organized better.

Most of the topics are cited in this article, I see one that can be added for Maia Chaka who was the first female ref, so she should definitely have a link. All of the sources look to be in take, but I will look deeper into them when I actually start to edit the article. From what I read, the sources do appear to pass the CRAAP Test. The information that I plan to add will definitely need additional sources.

I can definitely improve the things discussed about his officiating career, it is very bland and only gives a couple details about his 18 year career in the NFL. After he retired from being an official, he is now a rules analyst for MNF, but it gives nothing on what he actually does for that occupation. I will need to look up information depicting what a rules analyst does, mainly for MNF. I already know that he gets phoned in to give his opinion on calls that could go either way during games, but he does much more than that.