User:JPMCU/Climate of Tunisia/Glacier Ivy Peer Review

General info
Bernietenderman
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JPMCU


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Climate of Tunisia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * The climate change section could be split into multiple subsections to allow for more detailed information about specific topics (water availability, agriculture, urban areas)
 * Could be useful to add information about what Tunisia has done to prepare for impacts of climate change and/or to address and reduce contribution to climate change
 * More information about the current and future rainfall could be useful
 * The lead could be made stronger, it should mention climate change as this is a large portion of the article
 * The socio-economics impacts and the environment section looks good
 * Overall, the article provides good information in a clear way. I think it would benefit from a little more detail about individual topics.