User:JSau/High reliability organization/SelahWillis Peer Review

I could not find a sandbox draft of your article changes. In going through the history page of the "High reliability organization" article it seems that you mostly made changes to the wording of sentences. I can't see the exact sentences or changes that you made so I am not able to provide comment on them. One suggestion I would make overall is to add more information in your own words to the article. If you are not able to do that in this article maybe another one should be chosen to edit in addition to the edits you have made here.

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