User:JSau/High reliability organization/Taylcis Peer Review

It doesn't let me see any of your changes as they aren't in your sandbox, so there is not much I can peer review. I can see the edit history of the article and see your comments on what you've changed, but not exactly what it is what you've changed if that makes sense. If you want, you can send me your actual edits and I can do a more in-depth peer review for you, but no worries if not!

From what I can see it seems like you have just made minor changes like punctuation or rearranged sentences, I would say to add more original edits and bigger edits, like sentences or paragraphs of your own and such. This will put more of your own work into the article rather than just editing others work. It will also help you to learn additional information about the subject, and can help your research skills.

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)