User:JSchrum1/Amazon Redshift/Sxl79 Peer Review

Peer review
I'm reviewing the Amazon Redshift by JSchrum1

User:JSchrum1/Amazon Redshift

Lead
Guiding questions:

Yes, the lead is clear and seems like it got a good content that introduce the basic information about the Amazon Redshift.

The introduction explains the topic. However, I think they need to give some more detail about what Redshift is and how it works.

Overall, the lead is pretty concise and covers the basic information.

Content
Guiding questions:

The content only requires three parts of this topic. I think there should be more about to the topic.

Yes, the content is up-to-date, and the time line is related to the historically underrepresented populations.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:

Yes, all article looks fine. They did not put any personal idea into the website.

They did not include a lot of things in the website. Yet, things in the website look fine.

The balance looks perfect.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:

Yes, all the secondary source looks reliable. It does not contain the personal blog or other unofficial website.

Most of the websites are from the amazon company, which makes it straight out of the company information.

This means that the website is neutral and professional. The links work.

Organization
As mentioned in above, I think the content is well-written, however, I think there is more things that can add to the article.

The grammar looks fine. I can't tell if there is any spelling errors.

The content is also well organized.

Images and Media
In this website, there is not any images or media in this website, which makes it kind of confusing.

It is hard to really understand what is actually is in the first impression.

Therefore, it does not violates the copyright regulation or well-captioned.