User:JW302/Tight junction/Editorzcj Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JW302


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JW302/Tight junction


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tight junction

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * Looks well written

Content


 * The changes you've made seem to make sense. It's important to have equal representation of the various tight junction proteins, and I feel like you've been able to do that.

Tone and Balance


 * The content appears neutral without any under or over represented opinions.

Sources and References


 * References look good.

Organization


 * I feel like the organization of the article is good, I like the section depicting the contents of the tight junction.

Images and Media


 * The drawing is very well done and looks professional.

Overall Impressions


 * I feel like you got a really interesting project here. I'm more interested in tight junctions now.