User:JWdeisney/Climate fiction/Polaris850 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JWdeinsy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JWdeisney/Climate_fiction?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate fiction

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added was relevant to the topic.

I don't think all of the content is neutral, some seems to be biased: "Climate fiction establishes excellent character development and essential scenes that make a deep impression on readers, while climate fiction symbolizes one of the most pressing social issues of modern times, a feature that deepens individuals' impressions of climate fiction. Regardless of the scientific and credible nature of climate novels, the social conflicts and environmental problems they reflect are not overshadowed by scientific issues, but rather the incidence that happens to the main character, which is enough to change everything, enhances the reader's empathy" May want to go back and look at this section and try to find a way to reword this in a way that is less persuasive and more informative.

Lots of sources and references

The content is very well written, but a little difficult to read since there is so much information.

There were no pictures added