User:JWesleyPowell/Landless Workers' Movement/SRobert99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JWesleyPowell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JWesleyPowell/Landless_Workers%27_Movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Landless Workers' Movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead seems fine for the article, it introduces the topic concisely.

The content of the draft is great. It ties the relationship that MST has with mística together in an effective manner and provides good context to the practice.

You do a good job of sticking to the facts and not introducing any biases. None of the claims seem to come from you but are rather derived from the references in an impartial manner without taking any sides. Great job.

All of the sources cited seem relevant and reliable. You have a good balance of sources that are used effectively. While they are all from the same time period, that doesn't seem to diminish their quality. While I wasn't able to get a hold of the physical print books to check the content, the links you provided seemed to match the content you added.

Your writing is clear and concise throughout. It reads like any other wikipedia article and focuses on the facts without introducing any biases. It appears closer to a final draft than a rough draft. There are some grammatical errors however. I noticed an 'a' that should be an 'an' in the middle of your first paragraph in the line about Christian Mysticism. Also, more glaringly, you misspelled symbolized and organization in multiple places (at least to an American reader lol). Other than that everything looks good.