User:JZellMitch/Fundamental assessment/Candyw5268 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * JZellMitch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JZellMitch/Fundamental_assessment?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Functional behavior assessment

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your article is full of useful, valid, fact-based information and you have done your homework on functional behavior assessments. Here are some of the things that I found that may be helpful when completing your final draft.

·        The terms that you have defined do not always have a definition attached to them and there are word that were not defined that you may want to check such as precision as it applies to FBA’s, and function or functional behavior

·        There are two varying fonts and sizes which distracted me a bit and were harder to focus on

·        On the Indirect Assessment section, the reference used was from 2015, could you find a more updated article to site on this topic?

·        I would add more references to the sections that do not currently have any so that I can be sure to use an unbiased voice when editing.

·        Visuals would be great to add in as well to break up the information