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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title:Neil deGrasse Tyson
 * Article Evaluation:this artical is overall is really good there is one issue as someone who read several of his books i wish there would be more information about the books instead they are just mentioned as sidenotes. Something about exploring the world to understand more of our universe should be added. Afterall this was the main themes of the books.
 * Sources:death of a black hole, Cosmos, and Astrophysics for Young People in a Hurry.

Option 2

 * Article title:Chien-Shiung Wu
 * Article Evaluation:This artical is great I have little to no comments other then i wish that there was a bit more on the minhatten project. Her contrabution was in radiation and enriching the uranium.
 * Sources:https://www.nps.gov/people/dr-chien-shiung-wu-the-first-lady-of-physics.htm#:~:text=Wu%20took%20a%20job%20at,of%20uranium%20in%20large%20quantities. National Park Service

Option 3

 * Article title:Shirley Ann Jackson
 * Article Evaluation:this is great i will say some issues with this artical is volume and depth. there are some sections that are very small like "The Nature Conservancy" there is just so little information. Such as " the Nature Conservancy role is to conserver Fresh Water for life, and protect the envirmental form climete changes."
 * Sources:https://www.nature.org/en-us/

Option 4

 * Article title:Sylvester James Gates
 * Article Evaluation:this article reads very braggy not nutral just a lot of bragging about his accompleshments not really talking about what those accompleshments are. Like in his Career section it is very small and inclueds several accomplishments not why he was there. i would probably add more to his career section. add something like how his main work was on string theory.
 * Sources:https://sites.brown.edu/sjgates/bio/

Option 5

 * Article title:Priyamvada Natarajan
 * Article Evaluation:again just informatioan there is litterally nothing on her early life. this haves more information about her and her eairly life this would give more information.
 * Sources:https://campuspress.yale.edu/priya/bio/