User:Jack1231344/Kaṇāda/Tmzyang Peer Review

Your choice of topic is very unique, for that he is a mythical figure. I especially appreciate the organization of your article, which is very helpful and clear when introducing the ideas. The boxes and media are also informative. I would suggest maybe add or break into more subtitles to make the page more comprehensive.

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