User:JackFisher3503/Cai Guo-Qiang/KyreTia Peer Review

Currently there is no edits on this page. I have checked 4 other articles that have also been assigned to different students from this class and I did not see any edits in their sandbox or bibliography. I was sure to leave a message on a few of my classmate’s talk page to see if they have edits elsewhere.

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)