User:JackHUC/User:JackHUC/sandbox/Bryanna Jones Peer Review

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Your topic it was so interesting to read about, not to mention it is very factual with not only with your sources and citations but also from the sheer fact that it keeps a very well neutral tone to it! I also really admire the fact that you placed cited quotes from some of the things people said about the situation. It made me realize that it would be nice to add some quotes into my own writing of my article.

One thing I did realize is that you have two blank sections "Background and Controversy" Definitely understand if you didn't have the time and or just wanted to take it out completely because I knew I had to do that to my own! Just figured I'd mention it in case. But if you are looking for some reference on the Controversy part of the Operation London Bridge and or just the Queen's death overall, I found some that may interest you!

- A Tradition of Invention | Ex Fonte – Journal of Ecumenical Studies in Liturgy (https://doi.org/10.25365/exf-2022-1-7)

- The Framing of Queen Elizabeth II's Death Notices | ENLIT Journal (https://doi.org/10.33654/enlit.v3i1.1986)