User:Jack Oppen/On Colors/HoCL1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing

Jack Oppen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jack%20Oppen/On_Colors?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * On Colors

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The draft is organized and detailed. Each section provides a detailed and informative summary from the references listed.