User:Jackhan8582/Body dysmorphic disorder/FeliceRCLi Peer Review

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Jack
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jackhan8582/Body dysmorphic disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Body dysmorphic disorder

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I think your writing substantially contributed to the article.

In the original article, the social media section existed but was not very complete. You added a paragraph on fitness culture and addressed the role it plays when linking social media and body dysmorphia. I always see you at the gym so I know this is a topic that you may be interested in and I think you did a great job explaining how these fitness web celebrities may add to the anxiety of people with BDD. My only suggestion for this part is that there can be more transition to the next paragraph in the article, which is about plastic surgery. I know that some people may feel that they cannot achieve their ideal body shape through working out, so they turn to plastic surgery.

For the section on treatment, you may want to remove [edit] in the section title.I also like that you added links to some terms that readers may want to explore more.