User:Jackiemcdonnell/Yoga as exercise/Qfranklin1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jackiemcdonnell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Yoga as exercise - Wikipedia



Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a lot of good and well-thought-out information that is mostly non-biased. The content is also relevant and up to date as well. The sources used provided reliable information as well as great supports to back up the claims. However, with there being a lot of information is important to add as many footnotes as possible quoting where your information has come from. Furthermore, straying away from opinionated statements and adding more concrete evidence and information. It is important to also add links and other citations to make sure everything is stated and not plagiarized or copyrighted.