User:Jackjackkimkim/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Apple Pencil

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

The class focuses on computational devices so I thought I would look at a modern company which produces such devices. Among the recommended, I found a page for Apple and then a page for Apple Pencil.

It seems straightforward and neutral toned throughout the page. It includes lots of factual data about the pencil.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead section is very detailed and does a sufficient job providing a clear overview of the product. The content has remained up to date, given that it included a section for Apple Pencil Two which was released a couple years after the first pencil. The tone of the page remains neutral and the page was factual and informational rather than biased-- it did not feel at all like a propaganda for or against Apple. There are lots of primary sources that are sprinkled throughout the article which increases its credibility. I would say the page can use more images as there is only one so far and it is of the Apple Pencil One (an addition of the image of Apple Pencil Two would increase the overall quality of the page).