User:Jackmerendino/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article between the two provided in class, not for any particular reason.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead section: The lead section of this article is good. It is concise in describing who and Andy Schor is, what his profession is, and a bit of background information. It also has a small table of contents to help navigate the article.

Content: The content of the article is okay. It stays relevant to the topic while providing some interesting facts and background information, and it seems to be up to date. From what I can see, nothing particularly important is missing from the content of the article, however it does seem very short compared to the Michelle Wu article.

Tone and Balance: The article has good tone and balance. It is not biased towards Andy Schor, and keeps the facts concise.

Sources and References: The article seems to have good sources and references. Most of the sources the author used seem to be factual documents and reputable sources. I did see one ".com" source but it seemed to be reputable when I looked at it.

Organization and quality: The articles organization and quality is okay, there is not much to say about it because it is so short. There are no typos, but the grammar could be a bit more formal. The article is broken up into its respective portions well.

Images and Media: There is only one image in the whole article, so that isn't great, but it's a clear image and it is captioned well

Talk page discussion: The talk page of this article is very small, there isn't a whole lot going on. The last edit was made in 2018.

Overall impressions: Overall, I don't think this article is bad. It definitely has its weaknesses in its length and presentation, however I think it does pretty much all that it needs to do. If I wanted to know who Andy Schor was, this article would give me enough information.