User:Jackmetzger99/Water mass/Andres Antonini Peer Review

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Review by Andres Antonini:
The article provides all the information needed, that's a good thing, but it would better strengthen it if you guys went more in depth for every single topic that is being brought up. All the content is relevant to the topic but it just feels like an outline instead of an article that goes in depth on the oceanography water mass. If you can add different pictures that go along with the content would make it easier for the reader to put together what it is being talked about. So far, I am seeing some gaps, but these can be easily fixed by just expanding on the different topics within the article and finding a tying point that will connect all them. Viewpoints are a little underrepresented so you may want to expand a little more on that. The links work well, and it is good that you guys have different spectrum of authors. Well-written, good content.