User:Jacksoac/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Active mobility


 * Article Evaluation
 * the "Responses from the Public Administrations" section could use a subsection for the US, as only the UK, europe, and Wales (which should be put in UK) are featured.


 * Sources
 * childrens active transportation

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Sustainable transport


 * Article Evaluation
 * the lead is way too long and either needs to be cut down, or split into sections with a new lead. the "Objectives" section also could be explained better.


 * Sources

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Human-powered transport


 * Article Evaluation
 * It needs to be reformatted, especially the "Aircraft" subsection, the "available muscle power" section seems out of place and needs to be redone, some citations are needed, and the images could be redone to better match the sections they are next to.


 * Sources

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Solar bus


 * Article Evaluation
 * The "About" section needs more sources and could be expanded.


 * Sources
 * Solar potential assessment of public bus routes for solar buses
 * Solar-powered bus route: introducing renewable energy into a university campus transport system

Option 5

 * Article title
 * SunPower


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is marked as being written like an advertisement, and could use editing to make more neutral. Also, the "Cells" section needs a formatting update, and clarifications.


 * Sources
 * SunPower Corporation SWOT Analysis (sourced inside usc, unable if wikipedia can access)
 * [1] T. Odayar, "SunPower sets Q2 target for manufacturing spinoff," Power Finance & Risk, 2020. Available: http://libproxy.usc.edu/login?url=https://search-proquest-com.libproxy1.usc.edu/docview/2412759213?accountid=14749 .