User:Jackson Dutra/Gender separation in Judaism/Gabrielajorrin Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (JacksonDutra)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User talk:Jackson Dutra/Gender separation in Judaism/Bibliography

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? +
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? +
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? +
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? +
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? +
 * Is the content added up-to-date? +
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? +
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? +

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? +
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? +
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?+
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?+

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? +
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? +
 * Are the sources current?+
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? +
 * Check a few links. Do they work? +

==== Sources and references evaluation: I clicked all the links, and they work very well, takes me directly to the article it is referencing to most sources are current between 2005-2018... most about 2015. ====

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? +
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?+
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?+

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

==== Overall evaluation: Yes I believe the content that will be added by Jackson will make the article better, it dives deeper into what actually Halakha’s culture is without making it confusing and uses precise/neutral language in order to avoid bias. Although it might be a bit too detailed for the intro comment as it dives into Halakha but can be added to the background section! ====