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Article evaluation

JEALOUSY
 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * Everything is relevant, but some things could be deleted. For example, Elements of communication does not need to be included as it is not directly related to understanding communication theory.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
 * A simple definition of communication theory is missing, only a very complicated definition is provided which would be insufficient for some people to understand.
 * What else could be improved?
 * Could have had more content compared to the number of resources used. Increased tone of the language so that it is more interesting to read.
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * The article is incredibly neutral and offers no perspective.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * I don't believe any viewpoints are over/under represented because they are not intended to have a point of view.
 * What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic
 * The contributors are saying that there is not enough meaningful content, discussing graphics, and how to better communicate what communication theory is.
 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
 * It is a C-class article and it is part of WikiProjects on Computing, Sociology, Mathematics, and Telecommunication.
 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?
 * On Wikipedia, it is less developed content and discusses broad categories rather than digging into granular detail. It also is seriously missing content when compared to class materials.

On this topic I would like to include more recent publishings, enhance the gender differences section, add more about mental health and jealousy, and add more on biological differences between those who experience jealousy and those who do not. In addition, I would like to ensure there is no parenthetical citations as another user discussed should not be present, and add additional content on jealousy that is not focused exclusively on sexual relationships. The sources I will use to edit my page are included below.

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5609545/

https://digitalcommons.unf.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?referer=https://www.google.com/&httpsredir=1&article=1016&context=ojii_volumes

https://pdfs.semanticscholar.org/55e7/b38af1969bb33b16fdd5e457a1faf43fc4e3.pdf

UPDATED BIBLIOGRAPHY

References

Ammon, Rebecca L., "The Influence of Biology and Commitment Beliefs on Jealousy Responses" (2004). All Volumes (2001-2008). 17.

h p://digitalcommons.unf.edu/ojii_volumes/17

Curling, L., Kellett, S., & Totterdell, P. (2018). Cognitive analytic therapy for obsessive morbid jealousy: A case series. Journal of Psychotherapy Integration, 28(4), 537–555. https://doi-       org.libdata.lib.ua.edu/10.1037/int0000122

Hart, S. L. (2018). Jealousy and attachment: Adaptations to threat posed by the birth of a sibling. Evolutionary Behavioral Sciences, 12(4), 263–275. https://doi-org.libdata.lib.ua.edu/10.1037/ebs0000102

Levy, K. N., & Kelly, K. M. (2010). Sex Differences in Jealousy: A Contribution From Attachment Theory. Pennsylvania State University, University Park. Sage Publishing.

Moyano, N., Sánchez-Fuentes, M. del M., Chiriboga, A., & Flórez-Donado, J. (2017). Factors associated with Facebook jealousy in three Spanish-Speaking countries. Sexual & Relationship Therapy, 32(3/4), 309–322. https://doi-org.libdata.lib.ua.edu/10.1080/14681994.2017.1397946

Ramachandran, V. S., & Jalal, B. (2017). The Evolutionary Psychology of Envy and Jealousy. Frontiers in psychology, 8, 1619. doi:10.3389/fpsyg.2017.01619

2/22/19

-Updated section on gender/biological differences

-Added more about mental health/OCD/Obsessional Jealousy

-Removed extensive amounts of parenthetical documentation and linked them to their source (if available) -- Unsure what to do if the true source/citation was not given.

-Added segment about Facebook non-sexual jealousy

-Fixed spacing errors

3/8/19

-Updated the structure and flow of the document as suggested by peer reviewer

-Tried to recite reference entries 55-62 which are redundant, but was unable to because of an automatic template which creates additional numbers by Wikipedia.

SITE IS NOW FINAL