User:Jacksondk3/The Other Francisco/Thechipskylark3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

jacksondk3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jacksondk3/The_Other_Francisco?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Other Francisco

Evaluate the drafted changes
The chosen article has little to no information so any additions will be substantial. The contents of the sandbox shows a promising start and would overall enhance the quality of the existing page. But I would look at the third sentence because it was a little confusing to read and I wasn't able to follow the link provided in the reference.

Overall this article could use more content. Like a synopsis of the movie, production information, and release information (box office numbers or ratings).