User:Jacksonfarr1/Effects of legalized cannabis/DrewMorales9 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Jacksonfarr1
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Jacksonfarr1/Effects of legalized cannabis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Lead
- Good straight to the point of the matter (tax revenue)

Content
- Good meaningful information added however it feels a bit wonky as there are many statistics thrown at you all at once. All the Information seems to be up to date and relevant. This is great to show the capabilities of delegalizing marijuana and puts to mind different opportunities that arise

Tone and Balance
- "A study by Jon Gettman found that out of the $193 billion annual budget for criminal justice, $10.7 Billion could be saved every year."

I understand what you're trying to say however it feels a little disconnected as you don't state its specifically from the legalization of marijuana within the study.

Sources and References
- difficult to tell which sources are being used

- no reference to sources

-seem to have only 4 sources right now, however they all seem up to date and viable

- given your topic I think you have pretty strong sources

Organization
- Very well put together. Could feel a bit more fluid however thw topic is tax revunue which implies heavy statistics to prove your point

New article
- probably want to add a couple more sources to bring the notability up

Overall impressions
- I very much think the information you're adding is a very good fit and very informative to the page. i very much like the view you're bringing to the page. It shows the grand scale of the legalization of marijuana