User:Jacksonwacker/Call of the Wild (1935 film)/Shayneras97 Peer Review

General info

 * When you read the plot description, can you follow the story of the movie? Note any parts that were confusing to you.

The plot was very well laid out, and it is easy to follow. not confusing at all.


 * Are there internal wiki links to all relevant actors, production personnel, historical entities or events?

there are many internal wiki links.


 * Are there citations for any facts that do NOT come from watching the movie itself?

There are in-text links to the facts but no citations.


 * Do you see any grammatical issues that the writer should correct?

Seems pretty grammatically correct.


 * Any other comments on the entry?

Rather than link the actors to the characters themselves, try putting the actors names in parenthesis and linking that, for example Jack Thornton (Clark Gable).

Also, you have the citation from the references at the end of the first paragraph the —“Skagway, Alaska.” Wikipedia, Wikimedia Foundation, 3 Dec. 2021, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Skagway,_Alaska.

You might want to add citations to the end of your reviews in the reception section, it should automatically add the citations to the websites in your references section.

From what I see it's pretty well put together.

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