User:JacobJDawson/Artistic swimming at the 2020 Summer Olympics/Dwr002 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(JacobJDawson)


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 * Artistic swimming at the 2020 Summer Olympics
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I want to start off by saying I know this topic can't be easy to find lots of information on. Overall, the information that is there is good, there just isn't a whole lot of it. The intro is very thin, there is some good info there I would just try to add some more general knowledge information about the sport and the Olympic aspect of it. The Qualification section is a little bit hard to understand so if you could change it up a little bit so it is easier to understand that would be good. The charts are good and a clear and easy to understand. The article was neutral and balanced throughout and the grammar and punctuation looked good. I think other than the introduction I would say just try to find more reliable sources so that more facts can have a citation making it a much stronger article. I think the changes you want to make with the charts is good I would just take a look at the intro as well. Other than that the article looks good, just keep working on it, good luck!