User:JacobJDawson/Artistic swimming at the 2020 Summer Olympics/Indislo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JacobJDawson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JacobJDawson/Artistic_swimming_at_the_2020_Summer_Olympics?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Artistic swimming at the 2020 Summer Olympics

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article at hand is the Artistic swimming event at the 2020 (postponed to 2021) Summer Olympics. While I do think there is enough information for the article, I do like that JacobJDawson is wanting to add the placements of all the teams into the article as well. I would say add how the the event is score, but that would be on the main Wikipedia page so leaving it out will be fine. The second reference does not work anymore and there are no references to articles showing of the medalists performance so adding those would be great.