User:JacobWhite28/Salmonella enterica/Articles0405 Peer Review

You might get rid of the last sentence of your classification section because that is more related to transmission than the classification of salmonella. ￼Other than that i like what you have your sources are good, as far as I can tell your writing style is good, and your information besides the one above is relevant. The only other problem i have is there's not a lot but that's just something that'll get fixed either way.

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