User:Jacob Aloe/Binge eating/Brooklyncarson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jacob Aloe


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jacob Aloe/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Binge_eating&oldid=1012830951

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the new subheading "Men with Binge Eating disorder." This is an important part of the disorder to talk about and it's great that Jacob is going to add that into this article because it is very relevant. I like that he made it a whole new subheading instead of just adding it on to an existing one since BED's vary so much in men than in women. I could definitely apply this to my own article since my article is in about Haute Couture, I should write about the difference between Haute Couture for men and women. I think if he is going to speak about men with the disorder he should mention it in other subheadings as well. Example; under causes put in what the causes may be for men or if there are specific consequences to the disorder found more in men. I think the content added was good and adds a lot to the article.