User:Jacob Aloe/Binge eating/Micahfleming Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Jacob Aloe


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Binge eating


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Binge eating

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article provides a lot of useful information about binge eating and touches upon a lot of sub points and background information of the topic. It does slightly lack some other points in the areas of Health Risks, Causes, and Treatments. The first section about Diagnosis was written very well and gave bullet points for each point so a similar structure would be helpful in the other sections. The article is neutral however, it does seem slightly one sided and not showing how potentially sever this eating disorder could be to some people. Overall, the work is well written and provides information in all areas of study and all the reference links work as well as supplementary topic list related to this concept. The one thing i would say needs to be added is for sure more information in the health risks sections.